This is really good stuff Avery. The vegetables are very detailed and well done. Also, I like how you blended the pastels on the bowl to make it look almost "cloudy". Very nicely done.
Well done! My one suggestion is to have a table line in your work so that the bowl is not floating. Also consider blending in your marks in the background so that it is not too distracting from the focal point - which is your bowl of fruit. Good concentration and decision-making for color. I would like to see more of an emphasis on composition and how to break up space from side to side and top to bottom in the picture plane!
This is really good stuff Avery. The vegetables are very detailed and well done. Also, I like how you blended the pastels on the bowl to make it look almost "cloudy". Very nicely done.
ReplyDeleteWell done! My one suggestion is to have a table line in your work so that the bowl is not floating. Also consider blending in your marks in the background so that it is not too distracting from the focal point - which is your bowl of fruit.
ReplyDeleteGood concentration and decision-making for color. I would like to see more of an emphasis on composition and how to break up space from side to side and top to bottom in the picture plane!
Mrs. Stone-Danahy